##RIFF has logged ON##
The following conversation takes place
Riff: Heya, darling, what's up?
Trix: N/M, finishing up with that new virus Tom asked me to work on.
Trix: What about you?
Riff: Acctually, I was just about to go to bed. I might need to stay up if Rob comes on in the next two minutes, tho.
Another window appears, showing that a Tom has logged on in another program.
Trix: Well, he just logged on, so ur screwed...
Woman (v.o): Elisia? Are you still up? I told you to go to bed ten minutes ago! Turn off the computer and get to sleep!
Trix: Damm, mom caught me, g2g, see you at school tomorrow
Riff: I'll meet you at your locker normal time, right?
Trix: Yeah, till then, night luv.
##TRIX has logged OFF##
Trix/Elisia turns off the monitor and climbs into bed. The camera moves and zooms into the clock. Its red numbers suddenly changing to 1:01
*End of scene 1*
A locker door slams shut, camera angle on the side of the door. The closed door reveals a teenage boy leaning on the other lockers, looking towards a person too close to the camera to be in the angle. This is Riff. The camera pulls out to reveal Trix is the one that closed the locker.
Trix: I'm so tired, I can't wait for the weekend; I am so going to go buy that new laptop I've been saving for. My mom is getting mad at me because everything I do seems to mess up our computer... it\'s a piece of crap
Riff (distracted): Mmmmhmmm...
Trix: Wake up, sleepy head, whatcha thinking about?
Riff: Huh? Oh, sorry, I'm just somewhere else.
Trix: And where would that be?
Riff: Elisia, don't freak out about what I\'m going to tell you.
Trix: Don't call me that, you hate it when I call you James, and I won't freak out, either.
Riff: Well, when you logged off last night, something happened. This guy logged on and started talking to me, about how I was missing something, but yet I still felt it. He also knew a lot about me, he started to list things that he knew, one of them was you.
Riff: Yeah, it's weird, I know
Trix: Did he say anything specific?
Riff: He said he wanted to meet me tonight
Trix: What? No! I won\'t let you!
Riff: Come on Trix, I have to. This guy knows something, and I have to know what it is.
Trix: I dunno about this... alright, go, but I want to know everything.
Riff: I don't know if I'll be able to.
Riff: Trix, I have to go and see him. You can't stop me.
Riff: And you won\'t tell anyone, promise?
The school bell RINGS
Riff: I'll see you later.
Riff walks away from Trix quickly towards his next class. Trix stands there as the hallway clears, stunned
*end of scene 2*
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