The Nightmares

What happens after Revolutions? Is there another Matrix, is there everlasting peace? What were the alternative storylines? What were other characters' stories? Deus Ex, City 01, Apoc, Switch, Merv... Let your imagination go wild in here, maybe even write the Matrix 4 script!...
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The Nightmares

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The Nightmares

Calvin Lutheran has had nightmares his entire life, not nightmares like you and I have his are far worse as they are based on the truth, a truth he does not yet realise

Doing what anyone would do in his situation he went to a specialist to see if he can be treated in anyway…

After just 4 sessions he was committed to Kings Park Asylum for further testing we are now 2 weeks into his stay at Kings Park…

Calvin - “I had another one last night doctor”
Doctor Silverman - “Another? My that’s the 3rd this week!”
The anger rises in his voice “I know, being in here it’s easy to keep count”
“Calm down, relax… remember our breathing exercises, just tell me what you saw in this dream”

“Well it was just like the last only clearer and more…well it was more real, I woke up in this pink tub filled with pink ooze, only when I try to move I realise I am being held down by something but I can still breath through a tube someone has placed in my mouth, that’s when I see it, it’s a large spider-like machine that crawls along the top of water, its at this point I realise it is not a bath but a pod, I manage to turn my head just enough to see more and more machines and that’s when I wake up”

“Well by the sounds of it we need to increase you medication by…”
Calvin jumps up and kicks the table “FORGET THE DAMN MEDACTION ITS CLEARLY NOT WORKING, THAT THOMPSON GUY SAID I COULD LEAVE ANY TIME I WANT…I want to leave now”

“Mister Lutheran, it is my professional opinion that you stay here for further examination, that nice Thompson fellow will be back for you next week, now if you would please help me sort my desk out again

“Yeah…sorry I don’t know what came over me.. Here let me get that for you”

As Doctor is picking up some files Calvin manages to sneak a paper-clip into his hand as he lifts that table back into its position he takes a seat back on the couch and watches as the Doctor places everything back on the table as it was

“Now Mister Lutheran, you will take this note to…”

At this point a nurse bursts in the door

Nurse “Doctor come quickly its Davis again he keeps falling over”

Doctor “Excuse me Mister Lutheran I will return shortly”

Calvin uses this time to have a look at the Doctors file, Insane and Dangerous are the only words that stand out to him as he briefly reads through the passages until he gets to the last page with only a few lines written on it saying

It is in my best interest that Mister Lutheran stays under our care permanently, I believe if he is realised that he will become a danger to himself and those around him

Hearing the Doctor finishing with Davis he quickly scrambles to sort out his file.

Part 2 Coming Soon
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Very good. Hurry up with part 2.
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Awesome man this rocks. Very cool way to start someone's freedom.
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The Nightmare

Part 2

The Doctor walks back into the room to find Lutheran sitting on the couch as he left him

“Shall we continue Mister Lutheran?” as he sits down picking up his notepad and pen
“How long has it been Mister Lutheran, since your sister went missing?”
“Uh…2 years this March”
“And in those 2 years you have had no luck as finding her location, correct?”
“Yeah that’s true there were a few rumours that she had been spotted around town, but there was no solid proof, you don’t think this has something to do with the dreams do you Doctor?”
“Well Mister Lutheran, it is quite had the say my best guess is that the dreams were brought on by emotional stress but by the looks of it they are more concerning your sister”
“I doubt that Doctor my sister and I were very close when we were younger but as we got older we drifted apart, she was obsessed with computers and I had my own dreams to follow which I did, then we got the sudden news of her disappearing”
“Do you think she was kidnapped or forced to leave in anyway Mister Lutheran?”
“I don’t know, every Friday she called home, that was the first way we knew something was wrong, but there was no ransom note or anything like that”
“Well Mister Lutheran I suggest that you add a few more days to your stay, I already contacted that Thompson character and he agreed to pick you up on the Wednesday instead of the Monday, that alright with you?”


He hesitates to reply as he already knows the good Doctors plans for him…

“Yeah I see no problem with that”
“Excellent Mister Lutheran, I trust you can find your own way back to your dorm?”

Calvin rushes back to his dorm and hides the paperclip under his pillow

Later that night after lock up Calvin takes the paperclip to the door to use it as a lock pick after struggling for a few seconds he finally cracks it and he begins his escape…
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I can see that his sister has been freed from the Matrix and now that he is escaping he will soon be freed.
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maybe, you'll just have to wait and see
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This is so good, very exciting. And is the Thompson character agent Thompson? In that case I didn't get that first.
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well i intend to have part three finished soon
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Apollo wrote:The Nightmares

Calvin Lutheran has had nightmares his entire life, not nightmares like you and I have his are far worse as they are based on the truth, a truth he does not yet realise

Doing what anyone would do in his situation he went to a specialist to see if he can be treated in anyway…

After just 4 sessions he was committed to Kings Park Asylum for further testing we are now 2 weeks into his stay at Kings Park…

Calvin - “I had another one last night doctor”
Doctor Silverman - “Another? My that’s the 3rd this week!”
The anger rises in his voice “I know, being in here it’s easy to keep count”
“Calm down, relax… remember our breathing exercises, just tell me what you saw in this dream”

“Well it was just like the last only clearer and more…well it was more real, I woke up in this pink tub filled with pink ooze, only when I try to move I realise I am being held down by something but I can still breath through a tube someone has placed in my mouth, that’s when I see it, it’s a large spider-like machine that crawls along the top of water, its at this point I realise it is not a bath but a pod, I manage to turn my head just enough to see more and more machines and that’s when I wake up”

“Well by the sounds of it we need to increase you medication by…”
Calvin jumps up and kicks the table “FORGET THE DAMN MEDACTION ITS CLEARLY NOT WORKING, THAT THOMPSON GUY SAID I COULD LEAVE ANY TIME I WANT…I want to leave now”

“Mister Lutheran, it is my professional opinion that you stay here for further examination, that nice Thompson fellow will be back for you next week, now if you would please help me sort my desk out again

“Yeah…sorry I don’t know what came over me.. Here let me get that for you”

As Doctor is picking up some files Calvin manages to sneak a paper-clip into his hand as he lifts that table back into its position he takes a seat back on the couch and watches as the Doctor places everything back on the table as it was

“Now Mister Lutheran, you will take this note to…”

At this point a nurse bursts in the door

Nurse “Doctor come quickly its Davis again he keeps falling over”

Doctor “Excuse me Mister Lutheran I will return shortly”

Calvin uses this time to have a look at the Doctors file, Insane and Dangerous are the only words that stand out to him as he briefly reads through the passages until he gets to the last page with only a few lines written on it saying

It is in my best interest that Mister Lutheran stays under our care permanently, I believe if he is realised that he will become a danger to himself and those around him

Hearing the Doctor finishing with Davis he quickly scrambles to sort out his file.

Part 2 Coming Soon
I sense great potent in your fic. Keep up the good work.
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